Wednesday, March 25, 2026

Death, For Instance

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This is a time of video game wars,

the paradox of everything feeling both 

very close and very far away,

real and surreal, 

all at once: 


Death, for instance, 

which for most of us 

feels very far away,

now arrives from the sky

like a meteor on fire 

and images at light speed 

in your pocket;


And if you look closely

at the pixelated bits

shadows appear where 

people used to be, 

and you can see

the dreams of children

leaving their bodies.

6 comments:

  1. The dangers of video games? This isn't something we have discussed in the past as far as I can recall. Is part of the message of the poem that death gets minimalized and trivialized by video games, action movies, the nightly news? The poem is a nice mix of real and surreal. It appears to be focused on the video game for most of the poem, but the last line about "the dreams of children" seems to bring us crashing back to reality.

    leaving their bodies.

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    1. Wasn’t thinking this poem was about video games at all. More about war. And what watching violence through a screen, the closeness and simultaneous distance, desensitizes us to the real cost in lives and futures.

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  2. Ironically, I got interrupted on my last comment by a siren (speaking of "death ... [arriving] from the sky like a meteor on fire")! What I was trying to say was that the last line -- like the last line of a haiku -- comes as a surprise -- taking us abruptly out of the world of video games and into the real world, where "the dreams of children/leaving their bodies" could mean death -- like real death -- or it could mean the loss of their imaginations (from too much exposure to the video games) -- or maybe that the video games have entered their dreams, drenched their consciousness, so that they have become de-sensitized to death.

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    1. That last line surprised me too. I wasn’t sure where it came from - like a meteor on fire - and after a bit of consideration figured it should be kept. Surprise in this case is good I think. I think all your interpretations make sense!

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  3. I guess I took the first line of the poem literally! And I read phrases like "pixelated bits" and "images at light speed in your pocket" as reinforcing the video game motif. But re-reading the poem as a commentary on the "televising" of war makes sense, and is very good!

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    1. That first line is as much a description of video games like Call of Duty as it is about the way war is actually fought these days (drones, ballistic missiles etc.) througfh the screen, as we see online.

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