Tuesday, May 4, 2021

He Was Right

for Charles Bukowski


He was right

about one thing:

He had to write

not because he was so good

but because the rest 

were so bad -

and that was before 

smartphones

that tell us

what we want to hear 

all the time,

study us

like rats in a maze, plus

stimulate us

reward us

with digital kibble

for every dumb idea 

in our heads

every prejudice 

in our hearts

and we can't get enough

of ourselves 

so we engorge

until we die, fat

stupid and twisted

as the smiles 

on our faces.

3 comments:

  1. Who are "the rest" in this poem, who are so bad? I get your critique of the smartphone culture and the insidiousness of algorithms, but what was their equivalent in Bukowski's time?

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  2. Who are "the rest" in this poem, who are so bad? I get your critique of the smartphone culture and the insidiousness of algorithms, but what was their equivalent in Bukowski's time?

    (Btw I like that you, too, find poetic inspiration from reading Bukowski.)

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  3. Hi Kelp,

    Actually Bukowski was responding to the question why he wrote poetry, and he answered not because he thought he was so good (ie. such a good poet) but because all the rest (the other poets he'd read) were so bad. I sort of twisted the quote in my mind so 'the rest' meant all of us, poets and non poets alike. And we seem to be getting dumber, more ignorant, less literate, by the day thanks to technology - so Bukowski was really on to something with his sad take on and general disdain for his fellow human beings.

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