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Life
is the track record
of the entire universe,
for instance,
for instance
for instance,
take anything you can think of
take Picasso's Guernica
for instance, now
perform origami
of the mind
in reverse
unfold the angles
of that Cubist masterpiece
gesture by gesture
line by line
lift the layers
from the canvas
black and white
until the image is clean
but don't stop there
go back further
back to the store
where the house paint
and canvas were purchased
and the horse hair brushes
and peel back
another layer
to the factory
where the paints
and brushes were made
and go back further still
to the barn,
to the birth of a horse
go back to an event
in a Basque city
in another time
back to war
air-raid sirens
bombs,
violence
atrocity and mayhem,
anguish and blood,
death
and tears,
and to an artist
a man
to Picasso
his youth
his birth
his parents
his ancestry
his chemistry
his DNA
to molecules
and atoms
and even to
the very beginning
of the universe
contained
in all of us
it’s a wonder
anyone can sleep.
A deconstruction of the Guernica ... literally! A powerful poem for the times -- bravo!
ReplyDeleteA suggestion: Drop the last stanza. I don't think you need it. I think you are trying to summarize something doesn't need to be summarized, and is better left un-summarized. Just a suggestion.
You are absolutely right. Thanks for the help Kelp!
DeleteWhat do you think of just leaving the last three lines?
DeleteI'd say no. Save them for another poem.
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