Thursday, April 4, 2024

Ah More!

Dawn less spree,

Dawn less spree,

Twos key pass par laze you,

Say four may, Say four may!


Dawn no core,

Dawn no core,

Twos key pass dawn liquor,

Ah more, Ah more!

2 comments:

  1. I love poems like this which establish their merit based on the sounds of the words, even if they don't make sense. The last time I wrote a poem in this style was "Grave Matter" which is on my site. We should write more poems like this! They are fun! The sound of language is a source of unlimited pleasure!

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  2. My attempt at an English/French poem." It's tricky to do. Use words in one language to compose a poem in another language that makes sense. My inpiration was a voicemail in French that my phone transliterated into English that read : "Bonjour Russian, seat my Santa as Juliet. What time did the dog cat talk. Cat cat cat psycho cat cat cat..."

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