Wednesday, June 26, 2024

These Careful Poems

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These careful poems 

I hate them

they are like death certificates

filled out by doctors in creative writing -

scalpel-qualified professionals

performing autopsies

on cold bodies

with textbook precision and tedium

standardized forms designed

to pinpoint cause

for the living to file away

or send to the authorities

for approval

so the legatees may collect

their inheritance.

2 comments:

  1. I'd be interested if you could give an example of what you consider a "careful poem"...?

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    1. Ugh. There are so many. I get them all the time in my inbox from the Poetry Foundation. Bloodless. Sentimental. Unrisky (is that a word?) Academic. Overly crafted. Too clever. I’ll say, like porn vs. True art, you know it when you see it.

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