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His wristwatch is the athletic kind,
heavy chrome,
thick black rubber strap,
waterproof to 100 meters,
seems like a chore to lug around.
Do you dive? I ask,
surmising the answer.
We are standing in line
at the bank waiting for a teller
because the ATM screen says
"Temporarily Out of Order."
He looks up
as if he'd just heard
a bubble pop,
takes a yawning breath.
I like the style, he says.
There's a box
of my old wristwatches
somewhere in a closed drawer.
I'd worn them proudly.
Sporty ones and elegant ones
rectangular with gold roman numerals
and leather bands, Japanese-made
silver ones with numberless faces
that lock to the wrist with a snap
like handcuffs.
I think of buildings
with clocks built into them
before anyone carried
personal timepieces
when we walked in the streets
with heads lifted,
and classroom clocks
moon-like and gray above
the teacher
that made a 50-minute lesson
feel like days,
springtime's window slightly ajar
chirping in the bushes,
the shrieks of friends in the yard
at early recess,
the jealousy -
I remember learning
to tell time
that first intimation
of my own power.
The watch doesn't actually work, he offers,
battery needs changing but
I'm too lazy,
holds up fingers
like a wilting flower
to show me
dial hands
motionless.
My heart pounds.
We're all just clocks, I say,
waiting for the alarm
to go off.
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Your "slice of everyday life" narrative poems, where you interact with everyday people, are among my favorites, and this one is no exception. Lots of little gems in this one, different perspectives and observations about watches, clocks, and time in general. Made me recall the big clock on the Washington Federal Bank building on Fordham Road in the Bronx, something that I literally looked up to as a small child, and of course the many classroom clocks that always painfully dragged the hours out so that they seemed much longer than an hour. And all the wristwatches I have worn in my life, like old girlfriends, entrancing for a short while, but ultimately dicarded or broken beyond fixing. Your poem evokes all of this. And the ending is superb. This is a good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelp. Awfully kind. Time is on my mind. Having it. Not having it. And not being certain of either.
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